Love Shadow

Why would the chick not fail to fly

When it’s been adorned with attention,

Had always lived under a watchful eye

An exquisite of almighty’s creation.


Why would the chick not fail to stand

Her two feet could never hold her upright.

Being a bird, just a pretend; this wings

Couldn’t grant her the sensation of flight.


Soon enough, life will smile its ruthless face

And call upon all who’ve lost fear, to brave.

From a nest of eight, will rise only two

Those stubborn enough to push through.


Then, will this affection pave her path ?

Or isolate her from all this hurt ?

Through this life’s sweet and sour game

Will she succeed to scratch even her name ?


Like you, there is nor will be another,

Nor anything upon earth could, your love shadow.

Love her with a reason; love her with a passion,

Not weakens, but strengthens her all the more.


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10 Responses to Love Shadow

  1. pure2core says:

    So very brilliantly and practically written piece ….Thanks for sharing friend…

  2. Darryl Davis says:

    A well-focused poem around a clear theme. I did find some of the grammar and the font distracting, though.

    Cheers 🙂

    • jagring says:

      I apologize if my grammar is not up to the mark, but English is not my first language and I’m trying. As for the font, well… I don’t plan to change the theme just for it..!!

  3. so lovely and such a great poem for the love of a woman and how and what you should do excellent penned

  4. terri0729 says:

    Wow, so cool! I really liked this a lot. Very well done! Blessings, Terri

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