Those silent gazes that you render, takes everything off me
And my heart skips a beat, unsure if its origin be of joy or dismay.
Magnificence I behold, like a fading sunset,
Holds even greater beauty in its momentary.
You sit beside; I hold your hand;
Yet, I’m still missing you.
Harvesting caresses for a future date
For a time when I’d be longing for you.
Gazing at the bathroom mirror with your arms wrapped around me,
And, an unexpected synchronised sigh.
Thousand words remain unspoken between you and I,
But the heart silently understood.
Can I just say how glad I am to see that you’ve finally updated. Ending was pretty epic. Also, I see you’re writing about your mystery girl again.
Yup… History sure is a Mystery..!!
This captured the feeling of somebody in love,even though their partner is with them they still cant get enough.
Captured feelings I have for my son, sometimes I look at him and sigh, feeling that I can’t possibly show him how much I love him.
Brilliant piece
Really thankful for sharing a bit of your life with us, I’m sure some day your son will understand how much he means to you..!!
I like the air of mystery here – which I imagine miffalicious is referring to. I found it an enjoyable read.
Thank you very much. As for the mystery part, its up to each reader to decipher the poem in their own way..!!
Wonderful poem. Love the part about unspoken words. Beautiful!
My recent offering: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/
Thank you very much, trying my best to give words to emotions..!!
silence is gold at times.
magical moments captured, delightful entry.
Your support is very much appreciated. Moments which my mind can’t possibly skip..!!
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem. I greatly enjoyed reading it.
Your support is very much cherished my friend. Thanks for stopping by..!!
beautiful piece.
a slice of truth is divine at times.
🙂
Thank You, A slice of truth sure is divine at all times..!!
fabulous…
Thanks a lot for stopping by..!!
How are you today?
Happy end of November!
Appreciated your support to our poetry picnic,
Hope to see you share today,
A random poem or old poem will do the wonders too.
Your talent rocks.
Hope to see you in.
xoxox
Thanks Jingle. Will always be there. Who doesn’t love picnic’s anyways..!!