Like the fading rain the summer tempest ends,
Yet again, to return someday once again
But to no one’s ease or pain.
But again, the summer tempest sets yet again.
This time around, luck fell a little too short
And crash landed even before it took off;
How firm I held the ice between my palms,
Even swifter it melt away.
In nature’s monopoly, who are we humans
To question its mysterious ways,
In desperate surge of soothing remission,
Forbids nourishment to the sapling.
A dream I’ve harboured all my life,
Blazed his eyes of jealousy.
Leaving me no choice but to behold,
Him rob everything out of me.
Yes, this time around, I’ll pretend
That I just did not see.
But given a chance to hold you again,
I dare heaven, stop me..!!
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yet another superb piece of poetry…keep writing your heart …Thanks for share….
Thanks a lot, your support have always been soothing ..!!
love the ending.
fantastic sentiments.
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Thank You..!!
Yes yet again. If there’s a will there is a way. Go for it. Simple and smooth poetry but with lots of deep meanings!
Hank
Well Appreciated..!!
thank you for your comment. it means a lot when people say what they think, even if what they think is not necessarily something positive.
im glad you liked my piece.
i like your style of writing.
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I see strong emotion in what you’re trying to portray, however, a better form of delivery would do wonders for you.. Thanks, really appreciate your support..!!
Beautifully crafted poem!!
Thanks..!!
A well written and emotional poem. Very well done!
My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/28/forever-changed-2/
Thank you very much.. Like the blooming touch to your poem, Portraying fear and excitement of a virgin..!!
amazing flow….
have fun in poetry picnic.
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Thanks you too..!!
The ending is so wondeful. Thank you for sharing this on poetry potluck. My share this week is http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/29/the-one-and-only-kiss
Thank you very much, Liked you poem too..!!
Brilliant!
Thanks…
Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!
It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!
Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/
some of my Haiku Collections
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/
and also, on my very recent Work as well
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/
!!! Happy Rally !!!
Cheers !!
Thank you very much. I must say, your piece on Patriotism was a provocative one, and also enjoyed the ‘Somewhat Common’ a spring of Originality..!!
Spoken truely from you, thank you.
Thanks, really appreciate the support..!!
good one my friend..
Thanks for your constant support Friend..!!
“nature’s monopoly… dare Heaven”
You speak of things we cannot control. Yes, we know the ache to hold again.
Thanks for the idea.
Glad to have shared..!!
Awesome!! 🙂
Lovely imagery. It has a melodic rhythm. Lovely expression.
“This time around, luck fell a little too short”
Fortunately or unfortunately, yes, a little too short ..!!