He kicked the ball to him, and he passes it on to another,
And that was yesterday; today, the ball game is another.
The race that starts from every mother’s womb
Takes us to varied heights, causing erosion of our innocence,
What defines the difference today, between them
Was one who struggled today and the other who left it for tomorrow.
Some leave it to fate to decide their future,
Others make compromises with fate itself,
And fewer still, narrate their own fate.
Yes the temptation is strong, but will you waver;
Yes it gets harder from here, but will you adhere –
To your dreams, and be one among few
To witness your dreams come true.
Or will you choose an easier path, and let your dreams
Be dreams, and its reality will never see.
Does keeping yourself unknown satisfies
Now with fate that you’ve compromise,
Even worse a necessary compromise.
Struggle, an inevitable part of life,
You might as well today, or
Can always leave it for tomorrow
But I doubt that’s what you had in mind.
This is probably one of my favourites of yours thus far! Especially because it is filled with so much conviction. 🙂
Really..?? I don’t actually see conviction anywhere.. :P. Thanks ..!! Also, wordpress has been giving me problems regarding personalised publication.. !!
Well, it’s all right if you don’t see it, I do. 🙂 Hmm, what problems?
hopeful ending, lovely write.
Thanks for sharing,
Happy Rally.
Thanks Jingle, You’ve always been supportive ..!!
I see and internal struggle of choices and justification of the choices. I like it as I see myself within the words!
Thank you very much for stopping by, tried my best to sum it up in words ..!!
Very well done. I will not leave my fate to chance!
Good luck with that.. !!
Awesome poem, I love the message throughout your poem of fighting for your dreams
At the end of the day its our dreams that drives us, no matter how captive we remain in compulsion’s hand ..!!
Ohh! wow! Amazing and honest write….You deserve a great applause…Thank you for the share…
Thank you very much, I’m flattered..!!